Courtship of the Butterflies

we danced among fields
feeling as free as the wind
I am enraptured
your floral bouquet lingers
your sweet nectar, I still taste


TLH  ©  05-31-2012

Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:06 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Tanya. Love, Carol
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June 11, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Tanya! This is a beautiful and romantic lovenote. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:20 AM
Tanya congrats on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:26 PM
wow, I am glad to finally see this gorgeous tanka, Tanya. Big congrats to you.
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June 1, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Oh how beautiful this is Tanya!!! Love it dearly!!
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