Kim Rodrigues Poet Tetractys

Notes About The Poem

Courtship

Boyhood’s brave tire swings forth in adventure
idyllic wing’d
waterscape
Blond-skirt
g i r l,
whirls,
extends
her courtship
Nudges of bright
family picnics, boating, wading, trills*

8/27/2021
Double Tetractys 8
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Photo 2
HMS

*trills - twirls

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sam Kauffman September 14, 2021 at 12:00 PM A lovely courtship of words and images Kim. Enjoyed the dual perspective. Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2021 at 7:20 PM Thank you, Sam!

Paula Goldsmith September 11, 2021 at 11:16 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. Love the way you took it as a courtship. Have a blessed day/weekend.................... Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2021 at 7:20 PM Thank you, Paula!

Anitha Jayasankar September 11, 2021 at 5:44 AM Loved this dear Kim.. Hearty congrats on your win in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2021 at 7:20 PM Thank you, Ani!

Eve Roper September 9, 2021 at 6:33 PM Kim, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues September 9, 2021 at 7:40 PM Thank you, Eve! I enjoy writing poetry to your pics! :) hugs

Victor Buhagiar August 27, 2021 at 11:02 PM Loved your poem om a difficult picture. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues September 9, 2021 at 7:41 PM Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf August 27, 2021 at 3:50 PM idyllic is the perfect word for this scene, Kim. Bravo.~ gw Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2021 at 6:28 PM Thank you, dear friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2021 at 11:08 AM Hello Kim, she is trying to get the boys attention. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2021 at 3:54 PM Hello Kim, i thought so. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2021 at 12:00 PM Yes, she is!