Courage That Inspired Awe

A crystal-clear picture! 
                                The embodiment of courage! 
                An unsung Warrior, vigorously protecting uprooted, 
                        heart-broken kin, and many shelterless,
                   After a devastating partition of the homeland! 

                               A man in his prime, giving up 
                         dreams of comfort, luxury, indulgence, 
                      Embraces a life of unimaginable hardships, 
                                  a life of never-ending toil, 
                   So others feel safe, after a harrowing experience! 

                          A life of everyday struggle for survival, 
                             A life of torturous self-deprivation, 
                                 a life of agonizing separation - 
                                      From own loved ones, 
                                   so others live with theirs! 

                             I remember the powerful hands, 
                     which symbolized strength, offering a refuge, 
                         I remember the devotion and dedication, 
                         the tenderest care, the soulful empathy! 
                  I remember the determined voice which symbolized 
                              assurance, calming fearful souls.

                           Partition of a homeland - an unforeseen, 
                           traumatic, curse for millions of sufferers, 
                             Surviving with bare minimum, in an 
                          unknown land, for an unpredictable future!
                           Leaving behind all cherished memories, 
                                precious and prized possessions. 

                                   To me, One man symbolized - 
                                         how to climb uphill
                                  Carrying a formidable weight, 
                                    on the steepest  mountain, 
                                       And reach the summit 
                      with sheer determination and indomitable spirit! 

                                            He is My Father!


September 8, 2020
Winner In Courage - Premier Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cook
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/2/2020 7:09:00 PM
It's true we are grateful when we see what other people go through. A crystal clear picture indeed! Peace, Angie
Login to Reply
Ray Choudhury Avatar
Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/3/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, Angela, for your thoughtful and touching comments. My Father's struggle and courage left an eternal mark in my heart. Love, Mala
Date: 9/20/2020 3:06:00 PM
wow, it was your father. Amazing, and belated congrats on the win!
Login to Reply
Ray Choudhury Avatar
Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/20/2020 3:59:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so much for reading and leaving an endearing comment. Yes, it was my father. My parents had to struggle because of the partition of the country, but they were courageous, and supported a large family to stand on their feet again. Hugs, Mala
Date: 9/12/2020 12:12:00 PM
what a fabulous tribute to your hero, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Ray Choudhury Avatar
Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/13/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Yes, my friend, he is my hero. A brilliant man, but always took care of others. Love, Mala
Date: 9/9/2020 10:58:00 PM
A perfect rendition of the true essence of courage. Your father possessed the entirety of a courage inside shell attributes .Your father is a true WARRIOR , dear friend. This a a masterpiece for me..And a FAVE!! Congratulations!!!
Login to Reply
Ray Choudhury Avatar
Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Dear JCB. Yes, for me, I saw every bit of courage in my Father who dealt with harsh situations with courage, and dedicated his life for the well-being of many people, related or not. He was a true Warrior. Your inspiring words mean a lot. Love and hugs, Mala
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter