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Courage

Bareback riding on a galloping horse In the dark, using force To conquer barriers blocking my path Laughing a completely maniacal laugh. Wading through the cold, deep waters That flow from the mountains, Zeus' daughters. Battling hills and steep slopes Foolishly high are my hopes. Dashing through the open plains Hearing voices calling my name But I don't listen to them I can't, I won't give in for a gem. Gasping through the dry, hot deserts My breathing as loud as the loudest concerts. Listening to the music I cause Still not eaten by my enemy's jaws. What makes me strong you may ask? Well, certainly not a simple task. It's the courage and determination that does it all Courage and determination not to fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 7:25:00 PM
LEANNE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/19/2014 1:49:00 AM
Amazing poem! I've always tried to write poems like this one but I never got it the way I wanted it to be....come check out my poems btw
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Date: 8/18/2014 11:41:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, powerful, inspirational write that I truly enjoyed. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/17/2014 12:53:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Leanne - I choose your first very well written poem :) - I like it ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2014 11:27:00 AM
This is a great poem, nice end rhymes, a great message, well done. Welcome to poetrysoup. Hope you enjoy the community ;)
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:36:00 PM
Leanne,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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