Courage

 
The first time we met I was dazzled by eyes blue, and we fell in love and instantly stuck like glue. Always your velvet deep voice could hypnotise me, and when you said marry me I said yes with glee. Soon the doctor said a baby is on the way, we were so happy until that horrible day. In a grave our baby boy was laid to rest, we struggled with grief and really tried our best. You were so quiet and I tried to encourage, you died in winter- now, I go on with courage. ______________________ February, 21, 2021 Poetry/Modified List Form/Courage Copyright Protected, ID 02-1331-177-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, List With A Twist sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 04/17/2021 Third Place
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Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Expressed briefly but so poignantly.congrats to you in the congrats, my friend.
La France Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Andrea, thank you for the congrats, love _Constance
Seeker Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win!
La France Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Seeker, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Heartbreaking, Constance:-( True story? If so, my deepest condolences. Poem is fantastic, as usual!
La France Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 1:21 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment on my poem, yes true story, Celine's song expresses exactly how I feel _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 5:03 AM
So incredibly sad my friend, I am sending you prayers and loving thoughts.
La France Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Caren, thanks for your compassion and commet, Celine Dion's song are my thoughts and words too _Constance
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Wow! What a beautiful poem!
La France Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Seeker, thank you for the compliment, it means a lot to me _Constance
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