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Courage

The first time we met I was dazzled by eyes blue, and we fell in love and instantly stuck like glue. Always your velvet deep voice could hypnotise me, and when you said marry me I said yes with glee. Soon the doctor said a baby is on the way, we were so happy until that horrible day. In a grave our baby boy was laid to rest, we struggled with grief and really tried our best. You were so quiet and I tried to encourage, you died in winter- now, I go on with courage. ______________________ February, 21, 2021 Poetry/Modified List Form/Courage Copyright Protected, ID 02-1331-177-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, List With A Twist sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 04/17/2021 Third Place

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Date: 4/18/2021 9:36:00 AM
Expressed briefly but so poignantly.congrats to you in the congrats, my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2021 2:26:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the congrats, love _Constance
Date: 4/17/2021 8:36:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2021 7:46:00 AM
Seeker, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 2/28/2021 8:16:00 PM
Heartbreaking, Constance:-( True story? If so, my deepest condolences. Poem is fantastic, as usual!
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Date: 3/1/2021 1:21:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment on my poem, yes true story, Celine's song expresses exactly how I feel _Constance
Date: 2/22/2021 5:03:00 AM
So incredibly sad my friend, I am sending you prayers and loving thoughts.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2021 3:04:00 PM
Caren, thanks for your compassion and commet, Celine Dion's song are my thoughts and words too _Constance
Date: 2/21/2021 6:40:00 PM
Wow! What a beautiful poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2021 3:05:00 PM
Seeker, thank you for the compliment, it means a lot to me _Constance

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