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Inspired by the words of the Sarum Primer-God be in my head...

(5 couplets of 5 syllable lines)

Couplet An Example In Sequence

Jesus bring me joy
as I give you praise

Jesus give me peace
all my living days

Jesus make me free
walking in your ways

Jesus help me be
love personified

Jesus hear this plea
I now raise to thee




repost from 2010
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:28 AM
A lovely fine poem of faith and supplication. Thumbs up! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^------ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem .
Strand Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Sorry,Not a fan of political verse Zaynab
Sands Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:08 AM
Very nice Brian :)
Strand Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Cheers Heidi
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