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Countryside Bliss

Low under the blue 
A canopy of clad clouds
Shadow a meadow  


Inspired by Raul Moreno’s Haiku contest!

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Nadia Shahwan

August 9, 2009 at 2:54 PM

Pretty dicsription.

Brandee Augustus

August 3, 2009 at 1:58 PM

Wow! This is quite a delightful poem. It's very light and pretty, if those words can describe poetry. That's the only thing that comes to mind.

Sue Mason

July 27, 2009 at 1:40 PM

Love this title, Laura. Adds greatly to the imagery. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2009 at 12:53 PM

Laura, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

July 25, 2009 at 12:58 PM

exceptional haiku! exceptional recognition! congrats! Laura! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

July 25, 2009 at 10:18 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

July 25, 2009 at 6:44 AM

Lovely images this poem creates...well deserving this win!! Congratulations, Laura! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

July 25, 2009 at 2:50 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Laura.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

July 25, 2009 at 2:04 AM

Laura, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Nicole Sharon Brown

July 22, 2009 at 11:46 PM

GREAT DESCRIPTION OF A COUNTRY DAY

Brian Strand

July 8, 2009 at 12:51 AM

Like the allieration in L2 Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

C. E. Mcmullin

July 7, 2009 at 4:18 PM

Ahhh, the competition, stiffens!!! Thank-you for your always valued comments, and I will keep writing poetry as long as you keep writing poetry, as your talents glimmer with each new submission- Love, poet butterfly

Debbie Guzzi

July 6, 2009 at 5:25 PM

loved the mystery and romance of the last line! Luck to you! Light & Love

Joseph Spence Sr

July 6, 2009 at 4:04 PM

Wow! This is really cool. I can see the imagery just like it's outside my window. Great job! ~Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

July 6, 2009 at 12:52 PM

Very nice haiku, Laura!

Mary Duhart

July 5, 2009 at 6:06 AM

great picture of the country side. Short and sweet and thanks for commenting on my work also.

Jim Fish

July 4, 2009 at 11:44 AM

Reminds me of yesterday afternoon. Nice! Very nice! Reckon that's why you a favorite. Thanks again... ~<><

Krista Kurth

July 2, 2009 at 3:16 PM

Laura, great imagery and use of words. I love the illiterative phrase "canopy of clad clouds". Good luck in the contest. Krista

July 2, 2009 at 12:37 PM

I love the view in this one. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the kind comment on my blog. You made my day! Blessings to you. Karen