Country Story

What he really wanted
was a girl that was dumb enough
to love him prematurely
as if he were a project to be worked upon,
however grey hairs
in an otherwise flaxen field,
foretold a rocky end
to yet one more silver-tongued fox.

In a frouzy saloon
he hitched-up with a slow thinking,
quick drinking woman,
someone’s ex
on a reliable government check.
Eventually settling down with her
in a holler in West Virginia.

He took off his Stetson,
dutifully plowed her and some scant acres,
while collecting motor parts
for his fantasy truck -

plumb out of luck
he could never quite put it together,
no matter how well
he stummed his old guitar at the local bar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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