Country Song

My romance has become a country song
Everything I feel has turned out wrong
I thought that you were the one
You were my moon and stars and sun

Now I sit and weep
I am losing a lot of sleep
Just because you're not there
That you really do not care

Why don't you give me hope?
It makes it hard to cope
I just keep wondering why
You want to make me cry

I thought we had a good thing
Not that I wanted a ring
I just want you in my life
I don't want to be your wife

We have a lot to share
A lot of interests there
We like the same things
My heart had taken wings

You search for me in a crowd
It makes me laugh out loud
You smile when you come to me
I know that it should really be

Please show me that you care
You know I would go anywhere
With you I am not shy
You are my special guy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 6:51 PM
This is great mom, tapping into that romantic side, bravo!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:18 PM
There are some sides I never need to see *lol*
Bear Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Rick there are sides you never get a chance to see LOL Love Mom mamabear
Andresen Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 3:25 AM
- Oh .. so beautifully written ... feel your words arrive true and from your heart. - Romance in a beautiful song! - So glad you visited my poem Mama Bear - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bear Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Linda: Kind of you to say what you have but I am just a rank amateur compared to all the great writers on the Soup. This is not an actuality but a wish and a prayer Maybe someday this will happen again. Hugs Edith
Andresen Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 3:28 AM
- Nonsense!! - You're good - believe in yourself !!
A   Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 8:21 PM
hello Mama Bear :) A sweet, loving poem, to own and have that special love. A nice move, I enjoyed reading this poem, ..you have expressed true, honest feelings, within every line... Linda
Devereau Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Nice romantic poem...enjoyed...Noelle
Nance Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Oh how very cool this is, I dig it :) well done Mama Bear :)
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Oh Mama bear this is so beautiful am going to make it a favourite. Hugs jan xxx
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