Country Kitty

In the big city
I see a country kitty,
Playing in the street.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 2:42 AM
Great Haiku Daniel, I love the irony in this poem...Raul
Lopez Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:25 PM
Nice poem the thought of a country kitty in a big city must be scary....................nice
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December 10, 2008 at 10:01 AM
Interesting reflection captured here in just a few words. Much to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
Gass Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 6:27 AM
Great senryu! Perfect form and good imagery. I agree with the others. Hope she stayed safe. Love Robin
Richards Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 5:38 PM
Oh dear...I hope she keeps safe!! Kitty better stay on the sidewalk!!~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 4:17 PM
Hope you rescued poor kitty. Probably too many like that, poor things. Hate to think of what usually happens. So sad. Love, Shar
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