Jen H. Poet Rhyme

Countless Ties

There have been no lies
No long painful cries
We lay under the skies
Watch a bird as it flies
More perfect then pumpkin pies
I look deep into his eyes
But they are no disguise
For our hearts are together with countless ties
Ever since we exchanged our first "Hi's"
And never once have we said "Good-bye's"
No, "who's, what's, when's, or why's"
We work together like the sunset and sunrise
But still even if one of us ever dies
I know for sure... our love survives

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Miguel Jimenez March 28, 2009 at 6:34 PM has given me alittle more of what... women feel, when in love... we feel the same but for one's love to never die and make it survive... is truly a blessing... thank you-

Alli B. March 27, 2009 at 1:03 PM That is so sweet Jen. I love this. (I want this with Alex...not now but later) GREAT write! -Alli

L'Nass Shango March 26, 2009 at 9:35 PM That is exactly what I want ... immortality in love, may this poem survive in the heart of love. Peace