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Melancholy drifts while in paradise,
heart of the wind starts fading, there's no sound
Ocean reflects, the distance in your eyes
being light years away, escape is found

Captivated are the waves, calm of night
echo in the salty air--   ecstasy
Beyond its harmony, this pure delight
seconds flutter, without you here with me

A soul adapts to change, the atmosphere
luscious sunlight, being weightless and free 
With the tempo of beats, you are right here
yet-  you are still light years away from me

Countless minutes dance while in paradise,
Ocean reflects, the distance in your eyes



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Thoughts from the Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/21/2019 2:46:00 PM
The image and your writing are a perfect match here. One can hear the waves roll and the tempo of beats combining in a sweet sound...TAH
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Date: 8/21/2019 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Tobey!! The moment and the mood collide. Each emotion holds truth. You and your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/22/2019 7:51:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful scribble of distant love Brandy. Your poetry always shines and sparkles. Even so far away under a full moon and listening to the waves :) Love this! FYI, I used this title in my poem "What If" Thank you...hugs always..Charlie
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Date: 7/22/2019 8:51:00 PM
Oh my!!! Thank you Charlie for letting me know you have used this title in your poem. Such a wonderful comment. Thank you for your thoughts. This poem holds many emotions. Love, longing- sadness. Yet, hope lingers within as well. I appreciate you. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 7/5/2019 10:50:00 AM
After I met my wife in mexico we had a long distance relationship. I moved across the country to be with her and 26 years later I am still blessed to be with her. Love bridges any distance. I enjoyed the thoughts your poem brought back to mind.
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Date: 7/5/2019 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations Richard. I am so happy for you and your wife. Distance can bring two people together. Because of Love. Thank you for your kind words. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 7/5/2019 5:30:00 AM
The heartbeats of a distant love....Beautiful write Brandy..
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Date: 7/5/2019 2:14:00 PM
A tender melody of hearts touching. Thank you Joseph for kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 11:16:00 PM
Sublime poem so filled with emotion of love and separation for whatever reason. The yearning is felt. A great sonnet.
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Date: 7/3/2019 2:42:00 PM
You are right Victor, yearning lingers within. The thought of being far away, yet feeling so close at the same time. Your kind words are appreciated. Thank you my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 3:24:00 PM
I can picture her sitting on the beach at night, full moon, listening to the crash of the waves, wishing he was there...
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:54:00 PM
She can feel him so close, yet he is so far away. He is under the full moon, while listening to the waves. She is the one wishing. Thank you Son of Spock. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 8:13:00 AM
Your scribbles are taking you to new heights...I can almost see you lol...beautiful sonnet my friend...sending love...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thank you my friend with Wings. A Warrior you are. :) YOU can see me. I know what you mean though. My heart is here upon the page. Your thoughts are appreciated. Hugs and Love, Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 7:43:00 AM
This is very sweet! The imagery is taking me to the beach itself! Great work!
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Vincent. My heart is in every word. I appreciate your kind thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 5:52:00 AM
Sweet Sweet Sweet...I felt like sunset at the beach...Lovely write B...
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. My heart felt lost in these moments, yet the beats are strong- all at the same time. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 7/2/2019 4:44:00 AM
Heats can be miles apart and still beat as one and yet sometimes hearts together can be light years apart even when spending the night in paradise. I will ponder the words of this beautifully penned sonnet my sweet friend. John
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Date: 7/2/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thank you John. Truth tangles gently around these words of mine. So many emotions are deep within. You are right, miles cannot separate hearts. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy