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Counting Stars

boundless space gems,
spread wide in heaven's top,
high dose lift me up.

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2015

absenceaddictionadventureanxietyhaiku

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November 28, 2015 at 10:38 PM

Hi Aiyah, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

November 24, 2015 at 11:24 AM

A regular gravity remover. Congrats, daver

August 12, 2015 at 12:50 PM

so Beautiful but how many did you count....how many times did you start over before that amount....and in counting stars, did you count yourself....because your words are Divine, they simply take my breath....;)

June 26, 2015 at 7:45 AM

Back with deserved congratulations, Aiyah! Flying high...and still counting!:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:29 PM

I can just picture it!! Congrats.

Carrie Richards

June 25, 2015 at 10:26 AM

Inspirational Aiyah !! This is lovely !!

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:35 AM

Congratulations!

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 3:57 AM

Aiyah congrats on placing hugs

June 25, 2015 at 1:26 AM

Aiyah... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

June 24, 2015 at 11:06 AM

Hi! Aiyah, I decided to check out some of your poems. Did you know humans are made of stardust? :), jill

June 21, 2015 at 6:57 PM

celestial poem! ;)

June 21, 2015 at 1:51 PM

aya, your light bulb is on!.. eonderful 'ku.. hope you're fine.. huggs

Milton Robertson

June 21, 2015 at 10:43 AM

Beautiful and sweet.

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2015 at 6:47 PM

Oh to be among those sparkling gems. YES!

June 20, 2015 at 4:34 PM

beautiful imagery Aiyah:-) hugs jan xx

June 20, 2015 at 3:24 PM

That's one big treasure that provides magnetic attraction, Aiyah!! Impressive final line. // Have a lovely weekend:) // paul

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