Counting Love

I've whispered I love you, a million times
And I've given you ten- thousand kisses
I've written my love in five- thousand rhymes
An offering, your heart just dismisses

I've wiped at least a hundred-thousand tears
Whenever your sadness needed my sleeve
I've been by your side for twenty-two years
'Til you decided you wanted to leave

A thousand regrets imprisoned my mind
At least a dozen for each day we shared
I want back the love my heart had enshrined
For you will know that I'm sorry I cared

You've asked me to give it just one more try
I'm tired of counting, I'm saying goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Another great piece, my friend. Bittersweet tale. Excellent. Happy Easter to you and yours. Ralph
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April 20, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Stunning and so sad. Sounds like a winner to me!! Ellen <3
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