Counting

You count on your safety as you crawl around
And count on your parents to not let you down

You count on your lessons to find your way
Counting on what's learned, to be there to stay

You'll be counting money, sheep and stars above
When you need to buy, or to sleep, or to love

You count on the clock, so you won't be late
After counting calories of food you ate

That's a lot of counting, make sure of your math
Something not counted on may be in your path

Then over the hill's where you start to count down
Slowly then one by one when there's no one around

Hoping you're remembered as more good than bad
You punch out, counting all the blessings you had!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bauer Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 3:08 PM
very creative, pat!
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Ilene! Hope you are doing well!....pat
Faulkner Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Love the message in this, Pat, you should always count your blessings!
Adams Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Michelle!!.............80)
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