Counter Balance

Thelma to my Louise
Partner in crime;
Your smile...
Drags me from darkness to light.

Muse to my demons,
Always playing a perfect tune;
Laugh upon the wind, 
Inspiring me to new heights.

 Mechanic to my soul,
Break by break; beer by beer,
We patch, paint, and buff
The scars from our hearts.

Playing Jimminy Cricket
Angel and demon upon decisions;
 Anchor upon rough seas...
molding and supporting one another.

Transcending friend to family;
 Built in body guard, 
Protecting my virtue...
A sister you never knew you wanted.

Shelter from rain;
Shoulder to cry upon,
Best friend unto brother...
 I'd be lost without your beacon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 12:13 PM
many congrats Amanda xx
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:51 PM
thank you!
Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Enjoyed the write on Platonic relationships and congratulations on the fine win, Amanda
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January 30, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Thank you very much! :) mandi
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:28 PM
I really enjoyed your cool friendship poem. Congrats for your win, Amanda.
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this piece:)
Undertaker Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Amanda,a wonderful poem.Congratulations. great win.(: ) Jenish.
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Thank you! :)
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January 7, 2014 at 5:06 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Amanda ! - A very nice poem. - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Thank you:) So far I can say it definitely is a pleasure getting to know everyone a bit at a time everyone is so incredibly nice on here! I look forward to getting to read some of your work as well! :) Mandi
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January 6, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Amanda, a loving beacon you hold on tight too. Beautiful. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much on this warm greeting, everyone on here is soooo nice! I'm really glad you enjoyed this piece, I am looking forward to getting to read your work too; slowly but surely I am working on getting to know my fellow poet "friends" on the soup :) Mandi
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January 6, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Hi, Amanda,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Reslink Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Thank you so much for this very warm greeting! Sorry it took a while to reply my time online is somewhat limited most of the time so I am trying very hard to get all caught up, and I look forward to getting to reading your poetry too! :) Mandi
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