Counted Down

minutes counted down
hours have passed
seconds are coming
till im free at last

tied down by promises
already begged to be free
dont know what to expect
its all been cut in me

midnights been waiting
ill return her call
no need for reasoning
this is my last downfall

my time has come
this is no mistake
ill finally be gone
detached from this hate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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