Countdown

Just from four now
for tiredness
morrow
stalks

nostalgiai do not know?

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Carolyn Devonshire

August 24, 2011 at 3:36 PM

Yes, Nancy, those words "Morrow stalks" really hit hard. Excellent verse! Love, Carolyn (Thanks for your comments on the tribute to my father. "Reeds and Brass" is how I shall remember him now.)

John Smith

August 24, 2011 at 5:56 AM

'Tis brillig; morrow and the Jabberwock stalk. I feel so tired; I'll rest me by the Tum Tum tree. I love the tightness of your poems. No pleonasm for you.