Kim Van Breda Poet Rhyme

Count To Ten

COUNT TO TEN

count to ten
then 
back again

one last start
two lost hearts
three star courses
four sound choices
five deep dreams
six slip streams
seven mute skies
eight bound ties
nine steps back
to
tens hard facts

count to ten
then 
back again

facthardened
backstepping
streamslipped
dreamdeeping
choicesounding
coursestarring
heartloss
startlast

compasslocked
on


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© Kim van Breda—7 September 2015

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CayCay Godwin September 8, 2015 at 9:43 AM Interesting and very entertaining, I enjoyed the read ... CayCay

Casarah Nance September 8, 2015 at 7:12 AM Very creatively done! Awesome Kim :) Kim Van Breda September 8, 2015 at 8:09 AM Thanks Casarah.. having fun with numbers and word collabs. ~~X~~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 8, 2015 at 12:57 AM Love the take with sweet write Kim! Very lovely! Kim Van Breda September 8, 2015 at 8:12 AM Thank you Upma... trying to break the mould here ~~X~~