Brenda Mcgrath Poet Rhyme

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Count the Stars

I go outside and count the stars in the black night.
Their twinkling beauty amazes me in the moonlight.
I forget my troubles, as I gaze up at the sky.
It reminds me God is in control, and has me in his eye.

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Mike Reed May 24, 2017 at 9:56 AM A difference maker, I believe with the rhyming content. Neat Brenda Brenda Mcgrath May 24, 2017 at 10:30 AM Thanks Mike. I suppose I could have expounded, but that is all I wanted to say.

Sunlite Wanter April 25, 2017 at 6:55 PM I love the stars in the skies of West Texas - they each look like a diamond platter. Thank you for the memory. Brenda Mcgrath April 25, 2017 at 7:25 PM Thank you Sunlite. The stars in rural New Hampshire are also spectacular.

Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2017 at 5:02 PM So hopeful those stars! Lovely Brenda Mcgrath April 25, 2017 at 5:14 PM Yes they are! Thank you Kim :)