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Count the Stars

~Count The Stars~
(Free Verse) 


Dream about tomorrow
But live for today
Count all your blessings
Like children count the   stars

Finding ways to make wishes
And dreams come true for you
Reminding you to keep believing
In brigher days and  in yourself too

To give you Hope that is 
As certain as the  sun
May you always have an Angel by your side
Helping you through  all

When we're born,  we begin to die
When we die,  we begin   to live
I've seen the Light that shines
through God's Divine Love for all to see.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2002-2015



June.28.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bateman Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Hello "D" -- This is a majestic and magical write in every respect. The stars are part of mankind's divine connection to the Heavens and to God Himself. Excellent Write!! 7 + FAV!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Hello G!Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all G, your visit and the 7 + the fav, too,my dear friend.I hope that all is well with you and Ingrid:)Have a very happy 4th of July!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Devnath  Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Beautiful poem smiling with beautiful words. A 7 sure. Loved always my beautiful poetess friend,bl
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Thank you so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Merryman Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 4:30 PM
A lovely write, Dorian! That last stanza just really spoke to me. Love, Kim
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Kim,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
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