Count Em Out

The paddle at my seat dealt the sting
On lick three my ears heard a ring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 24, 2010 at 6:29 PM
I'd like to think you're talking about baseball, Robb, but I think this might have been a paddling inflicted by a parent or other elder. Very intriguing, my friend, and your Soup mail has been returned. Love, Carolyn
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October 24, 2010 at 5:29 PM
last time that happened to me was in jr. high.
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October 24, 2010 at 4:48 PM
OK I'll bite... this could mean lots of things Robb ... shall I choose the naughty one? luv..
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