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The paddle at my seat dealt the sting On lick three my ears heard a ring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2010 6:29:00 PM
I'd like to think you're talking about baseball, Robb, but I think this might have been a paddling inflicted by a parent or other elder. Very intriguing, my friend, and your Soup mail has been returned. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2010 5:29:00 PM
last time that happened to me was in jr. high.
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:48:00 PM
OK I'll bite... this could mean lots of things Robb ... shall I choose the naughty one? luv..
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