The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Couldn'T Keep Still

i tried to draw a shadow,
couldn't keep still;
it flew from me. i wanted
more chances as i saw
them, shadow dances sparkled
from corner to corner.
couldn't keep still;
love until dark skies wiped
out stars, no more damage
for they've dried into scars;
couldn't keep still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide
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