Couldn'T Be Prouder

I couldn't be prouder
than the day you were born
my beautiful little miracle 

your tiny fingers curled over mine
your pretty eyes captured me
and melted me
I loved you then
and every day 
since your 
arrival from heaven

we won't talk about what I would do
to anyone who would ever harm you
but that's what I thought holding you
for the first time
my precious baby girl

and we won't talk about
any struggles raising you
(there were only a few)
all the tears and pain in the world 
would never erase the joy 
I feel when you smile
and, my angel
you smile so much

on my arm 
on this day
I have to give you away
you are the most resplendent treasure

who wouldn't cry to see you
walking down the aisle 

your handsome groom 
whom I know loves you
as much as I do 
can't keep his eyes dry

reading vows 
from your huge heart 
only makes it harder
warm love tumbles
down my cheeks
just seeing the sky 
above you 
so clear blue
a 
wispy white lace
canopy of grace
etched delicately 
over you

and that guy with whom
I like to barbecue
golf 
and share a good shot of
whiskey 

I love him too

and your little you
who lights up the world 
she's only two
lucky you
experiencing the blessing
I had
well "have"

my beautiful baby girl
who's teeny tiny fingers
curled over
my callused hand
who 
with her daddy
went on dessert dates 
played hooky 
and
hunted ghosts
in that old hotel
my favorite
fishing buddy...
 ...she'll always be mine

sun sparkling your gown 
like magic radiating 
from your soul

I couldn't be prouder
than the day you were born
but damn this comes close

my barbecue buddy 
could not ask for 
a more priceless gift
than the one whose 
gentle hand squeezes mine
just before it lets go

soft fingers curl 
tenderly into his

my precious baby

his beautiful bride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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