Could You Really Be the One? Part 2

I thought it felt right, 

we never seemed to fight. 

I really loved you, and that will not fade, 

and now I'm left with the scars you made.

I told you forever, and I meant it, 

you barried me and my feelings in an empty pit. 

my soul longs for the light of a new reason to live, 

but for now, I've nothing left to give. 

I still lay here, motionless, right where you left me, 

waiting for someone to set my soul free.

 

-Neko
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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