Could It Be...?

Could it be... Free, free to be me entirely My thoughts, desires, dreams and schemes! The aggression, depression, and explicit suggestion They don’t sway or push you away. Could it be you are here to stay? Dare I say; the questions are starting to fade away. The guards that were reinforced with lies as their primary source Even they are beginning to disassemble and change there course. Lay

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2011 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations Lay on your well deserved featured poem this week. Love, Carol

Richard Pickett

Date: 11/29/2011 8:57:00 AM

Very nice Piece here Walayee....Very smooth and good to read. God Bless ....Taz

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/22/2010 8:50:00 AM

Walayee, I'm so glad that you left a comment and I was able to come read your poetry. This is good work. I really like, "The guards that were einforced with lies...." very creative and original. Love, Audrey