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Couch Potato

COUCH POTATO Spuddy Duddy
written August 31, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/3/2021 10:46:00 AM
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Hilarious! Reminds me of Gershon's kind of poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/3/2021 11:05:00 AM
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Thanks. Yes, Gershon writes some really fine stuff. I enjoy his work, too.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 9/1/2021 10:12:00 AM
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that's really very cute.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/31/2021 12:03:00 PM
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Lol, you got that right Milton. Soup mail. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/31/2021 12:48:00 PM
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Spot on/ Mil ton
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/31/2021 12:28:00 PM
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Tom, I increased it by a syllable in both lines. How's that?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/31/2021 12:23:00 PM
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Thanks, Tom. I was just playing around again!

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