Couch Potato

COUCH POTATO Spuddy Duddy
written August 31, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Hilarious! Reminds me of Gershon's kind of poem.
Hankins Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Thanks. Yes, Gershon writes some really fine stuff. I enjoy his work, too.
Kaufman Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 10:12 AM
that's really very cute.
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Lol, you got that right Milton. Soup mail. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Spot on/ Mil ton
Hankins Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Tom, I increased it by a syllable in both lines. How's that?
Hankins Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thanks, Tom. I was just playing around again!
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