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Couch

Another night alone Emotions begin to flow Should I stay here Should i go for a drink The couch envelops me with its soft warmth The outside beckons with its mystery Potential of meeting new people New stories, new faces This will be another night alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/13/2015 6:12:00 PM
It takes confidence to a leap off the couch Caleb - far easier to stay where you are comfortable... but lonely:-( great write:-) hugs jan xx
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Caleb Lo
Date: 11/13/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words. :)
Date: 11/13/2015 6:12:00 PM
Please let me know what you thing. I have just started writing. I am not sure if I am even doing this right. I just needed to express some feelings.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2015 6:16:00 PM
The most important thing is you write to express yourself Caleb - there is no right or wrong:-) I only started writing 20 months ago and have been on the journey of a lifetime:-) hugs jan xx

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