Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

Cotton Candy Skies Senryu

……COTTON CANDY SKIES……



                pink, strawberry ones
                reflecting sunlight are the best
                reaching one……hardest


                         9/22/2022
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Gershon Wolf September 27, 2022 at 7:47 PM Love the thought... even the frustration. Sharp senryu, my friend. ~ Head in the Clouds, Feet on the Ground Panagiota Romios September 28, 2022 at 3:02 PM More like….mouth in the clouds, feet on the earth! I, too thought it was a unique senryu. Quite not the run of the mill ones! Thank you, Gershon Panagiota xx

Joseph P. DiMino September 24, 2022 at 4:42 AM Reminds me of Coney Island when a kid. When entertainment was entertainment. And I was yet I. Love it! Panagiota Romios September 24, 2022 at 3:49 PM Wow Prince! I loved Coney Island. I was so amazed, they had Salt Water Taffy. We had none in the Midwest. Mom bought me my first two piece bathing suit…like a metallic pink. I don’t recall rainbows there. But he loved the Atlantic Ocean, Huds, Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2022 at 1:33 PM - I can see them... beautiful to look at, Pangie :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Panagiota Romios September 23, 2022 at 2:17 PM Greetings Anne -Lise! Nothing like pink clouds… ….if only we could Taste their spun sugar, eh? You, too, have a lovely, colorful ..autumn weekend, Peace, Pangie xx

Michael Tor September 23, 2022 at 12:43 PM Clever Pangie I saw what you wrote and I loved it. Be blessed. Panagiota Romios September 23, 2022 at 1:14 PM Both you and Elena are extremely bright! That is why you liked this Senryu. It looks simple but the third line, is the real catcher. You and Elena are “ reachers”…so, am I. Thank you, Pangie with hugs xx

Elena Eagle September 23, 2022 at 6:16 AM Cotton candy is a wonderful mystery to enjoy. I really liked this poem. Panagiota Romios September 23, 2022 at 10:11 AM I am so glad you liked this, Elena. It takes thought to understand it…..apparently, you got the point! I am grateful. Hugs, Pangie xx