Mystic Rose Rose Poet Pantoum

Cotton Candy Kisses

Summer blast, cotton candy kisses and so much more  
hotdog vendors and music blaring from the band stands 
 July is in full swing, a repeating June's adore   
time to celebrate our Country and our blessed  land  
 hotdog vendors and music blaring from the band stands 
Cool evenings draping lawn chairs and children neon smiles 
time to celebrate our Country and our blessed land 
Square dancing, rock and roll, then, a firework compile
cool evenings draping lawn chairs and children neon smiles 
July is in full swing, a repeating June's adore 
Square dancing, rock and roll, then, a firework compile 
summer blast, cotton candy kisses and so much more.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian January 7, 2021 at 4:31 PM Pantoum very well done. Enjoyed

Justin Bordner January 3, 2021 at 4:09 PM Sounds like my New Years Eve...love the vivacity Vienna...J.A.B.

Rico Leffanta January 3, 2021 at 10:36 AM Square dancing and rock and roll? Must be the USA! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 7:50 AM i can imagine the celebrations on your nations day are quite spectacular:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit January 3, 2021 at 6:58 AM Feelings of warmth in your great summer imagery--just the uplifting words I need. It's winter where I am.

Regina Mcintosh January 3, 2021 at 5:14 AM Lovely verse... so original and vibrant, appeals to the senses. A genuine artistic write. God B L E S S you