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Cotton Candy Kiss

How about a cotton candy kiss, right across these little lips? Our bodies might mesh in an orbital bliss, like the sun and the moon during lunar eclipse.

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/16/2023 10:19:00 AM

Very cute! Loved the last line.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/19/2023 2:06:00 AM

Really very cute Nancy, and what a kiss this would be within a lunar eclipse! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/13/2023 9:53:00 AM

A sweet/fun write. I wish I had a bag of your cotton candy and then for a kiss. Have a great day.....................

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/14/2023 8:49:00 AM

thanks Ms. Paula. Happy Valentines Day 2 you. Hope all is well. I'm still computer less for another week and am at the library for a short visit today. God Bless.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/12/2023 2:36:00 PM

Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/14/2023 8:51:00 AM

Happy Valentines Day Ms. Gina. May God Bless you and reassure you that you are loved. Nancy

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2023 11:38:00 AM

Very sweet Nancy :)

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/12/2023 11:53:00 AM

Happy Valentines Day Ms. Heidi. I appreciate you reading my short poem. My time on the computer here is almost over, so I'll quickly read some of yours. Hope you are well. Nancy