Cotton Candy Kiss

How about a cotton candy kiss,
right across these little lips?
Our bodies might mesh
in an orbital bliss,
like the sun and the moon during lunar eclipse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Very cute! Loved the last line.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 2:06 AM
Really very cute Nancy, and what a kiss this would be within a lunar eclipse! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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February 13, 2023 at 9:53 AM
A sweet/fun write. I wish I had a bag of your cotton candy and then for a kiss. Have a great day.....................
Kaufman Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:49 AM
thanks Ms. Paula. Happy Valentines Day 2 you. Hope all is well. I'm still computer less for another week and am at the library for a short visit today. God Bless.
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February 12, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina
Kaufman Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Happy Valentines Day Ms. Gina. May God Bless you and reassure you that you are loved. Nancy
Sands Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Very sweet Nancy :)
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February 12, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Happy Valentines Day Ms. Heidi. I appreciate you reading my short poem. My time on the computer here is almost over, so I'll quickly read some of yours. Hope you are well. Nancy
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