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Cotton Ball Fluffy

Pure cotton ball fluffy Most popular tissue, end of a q-tip Fresh clean virginal snow Bathrooms and bathtubs Twinkles in the cosmos White all around me Lacy white collars Lacy white anklets Lacy white petticoats Lacy white pantaloons Lacy white old people White all around me Light fixture essence Glow from a distant headlight Porches and paper All the same bright Tails of deer, polka dots on a navy dress White all around me

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Date: 5/21/2019 5:14:00 PM
I like the lacy white old people description. Right on deary.!!!!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 5:26:00 PM
I am looking at my thin white skin which is spotted more like a frog's hand now. Like my grandmother's and it makes me happy.
Date: 5/21/2019 3:38:00 PM
In a poem, one can use almost anything. After all, poetry is not a scientific treatise. You can see things I never dreamed of! Fabulous. Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 5:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I challenged myself to write color poems this week and it has been a blast!
Date: 5/21/2019 2:58:00 PM
pantaloons? Who wears these nowadays? Give me, Hanes her way, anyday!"
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 5:41:00 PM
I am a pantaloon kind of woman; they are breezy!

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