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colorful sweet peas cling on to broken trellis perfume fills the air Bite Size Poem no18 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 08/24/21

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Date: 9/2/2021 11:50:00 AM
One of my favorite flowers in the summer. Their smell is divine. Nice job Jan. Congrats on your top winY3E
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:00:00 PM
Mmm…
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2021 6:27:00 PM
Great imagery , Jan, congratulations in your win. Did you like the book? Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve the book is delightful just wish i had grandchildren who would enjoy it!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2021 11:29:00 AM
mmm i can almost smell it <3 love sweet peas, sweet write ! congratulations on your win <3
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:40:00 PM
i love the scent too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/28/2021 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Yes, "perfume fills the air." Have a blessed day/weekend...................
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2021 9:48:00 AM
I love the image of the vibrant vines wrapped around the broken trellis, something profound in that~
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Michelle i am so glad you liked that part of the imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/26/2021 7:17:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku with lovely imagery dear Jan... Loved the image too... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Ani:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/26/2021 4:48:00 AM
Wonderful garden of imagery! Lovely haiku Jan Happy Thursday!!
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/26/2021 12:16:00 AM
That's lovely, you know I have not seen sweet peas going in a garden for ages...Delice
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:39:00 PM
my late mother in law grew them:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2021 2:27:00 PM
so pretty, Jan. What is UP, my lady?? Seems like ages since we emailed!
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:38:00 PM
have replied xx
Date: 8/25/2021 11:18:00 AM
Love that sunshine!
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2021 6:17:00 AM
As a child, I always loved my grandmother's sweet pea garden, growing on her wire fence. I can't recall the last time I saw them growing anywhere. I enjoyed your display of them in words and photo.
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:38:00 PM
thanks so much Jenna:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2021 1:44:00 AM
I can almost smell them. Hugs.
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much victor, i adore the scent:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/24/2021 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/24/2021 4:28:00 PM
Wonderful write Jan, best wishes
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/24/2021 2:18:00 PM
Love it, Jan. I think Line will appreciate it, too. I love sweet peas, so unassuming, but colorful, when blooming.
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:36:00 PM
I adore the scent Milton:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/24/2021 2:16:00 PM
Love the image Jan, sadly many of ours are starting to turn now, autumn is on its way. Tom
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom the poem was inspired by a neighbour bringing some flowers round for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/24/2021 2:13:00 PM
What a great rhythmic Haiku, I love it, and I wish you luck with Line contest.
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:35:00 PM
Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

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