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Cottage Garden Flowers

colorful sweet peas
cling on to broken trellis
perfume fills the air

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08/24/21

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Jeanne Mcgee

September 2, 2021 at 11:50 AM

One of my favorite flowers in the summer. Their smell is divine. Nice job Jan. Congrats on your top winY3E

Kim Rodrigues

August 29, 2021 at 12:00 PM

Mmm…

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:42 PM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

August 28, 2021 at 6:27 PM

Great imagery , Jan, congratulations in your win. Did you like the book? Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:41 PM

Thanks so much Eve the book is delightful just wish i had grandchildren who would enjoy it!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paris-Maree Boreham

August 28, 2021 at 11:29 AM

mmm i can almost smell it <3 love sweet peas, sweet write ! congratulations on your win <3

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:40 PM

i love the scent too:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

August 28, 2021 at 10:25 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Yes, "perfume fills the air." Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:40 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

August 28, 2021 at 9:48 AM

I love the image of the vibrant vines wrapped around the broken trellis, something profound in that~

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:40 PM

Thanks so much Michelle i am so glad you liked that part of the imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Anitha Jayasankar

August 26, 2021 at 7:17 PM

Beautiful Haiku with lovely imagery dear Jan... Loved the image too... Hugs... ~ Ani

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:39 PM

Thanks so much Ani:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

August 26, 2021 at 4:48 AM

Wonderful garden of imagery! Lovely haiku Jan Happy Thursday!!

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:39 PM

Thanks so much Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 26, 2021 at 12:16 AM

That's lovely, you know I have not seen sweet peas going in a garden for ages...Delice

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:39 PM

my late mother in law grew them:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2021 at 2:27 PM

so pretty, Jan. What is UP, my lady?? Seems like ages since we emailed!

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:38 PM

have replied xx

Rico Leffanta

August 25, 2021 at 11:18 AM

Love that sunshine!

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:38 PM

Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

August 25, 2021 at 6:17 AM

As a child, I always loved my grandmother's sweet pea garden, growing on her wire fence. I can't recall the last time I saw them growing anywhere. I enjoyed your display of them in words and photo.

Jan Allison

August 30, 2021 at 3:38 PM

thanks so much Jenna:-) hugs jan xx