Costly Tale- Make a Poem Contest

was a garden unloved not many flowers 
memories run deep and were buried there 
here children used to play in summer showers 
a cat stalked  looking absurd with an irritable stare

we caught this moggie stalking a tiny mouse
was hiding away in the iris bed
not caring one iota that a cat was about
he laid down to snooze resting his head 

suddenly he heard the thunder of paws
jumped up with a start through a window ran
landed on the gas meter which was old beyond years
broke off the pipe, was a big bang

an engineer was called a man heard the blast
an evil smell emits the air
was a genial man with a happy smile
costly job this, to make a repair.

the mouse was stunned and lying there 
gave his chest a rub a generous thought 
i appreciate that the little mouse said 
excellent said the repairman  as a remedy he sought

remember all no matter large or small
look where you land when you take a fall

took me forever to write this 

penned on 6/7/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Corbin Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:18 AM
This was so creative! Great work <3
Turner Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Well done. I too, found it very difficult. Good luck, Seren.
Nance Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Much enjoyed and best of luck in the contest, it is neat to see where the word list took you :)
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