Notes About The Poem

Written 10th August, 2026 for Deviants and Divine Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One.

Cosmos and Chaos

Planets.  
Pearl-bright.  
Patient.

Each one  
    a polished bead  
        gliding through  
             black silk,  
                 each silver arc  
                     held in a hush  
                          of law.

No crash.  
No cry.  

Only curves.  

Only the slow  
      spill of moonlight  
           across distance,  
               only the clean  
                   turn of bodies  
                        kept by light.

Black hole.  

Bruise in space.  

Mouth of midnight.  

A hunger  
      with no face.

It takes light  
      as breath.  

Bends it.  
Breaks it.  

Leaves nothing  
      but the shape  
           of a void.

Not ornament.  
Not mercy.  
Not even anger.  

Just appetite.  
Just absence  
    with teeth.

And still —  
    it belongs.

A flaw  
    in fine glass.  

A dark seed  
    in the stars.  

A wound  
    the sky  
        does not close.

The pearl  
     and the prism,  
          the ring  
               of ice-bright moons,  
                     the seam of light  
                 stitched across dark,  
         the lucid lattice  
    of orbit.

The planets keep  
      their measured glow —  

white fire,  
silver tide,  

a clean geometry  
        of turning.

We live  
      by such motion too.

The calculated  
     white fire of habit,  
          the cold silver  
               of our duties.

And then  
     the pulse.  

A wilder rapture  
    that does not circle,  
         an internal eclipse,  
    a sudden,  
faceless hunger.

Small orbits.  
Hidden falls.

A face  
     still bright  
          while gravity  
     breaks beneath.

So let the heavens  
     remain uneven.

Let the black hole  
     keep devouring.

Let the planets  
    keep circling  
        their silver law,  
            their pearl-lit rounds,  
         their patient,
     lucid blaze.

Beauty, perhaps,  
is not innocent.

Only pattern  
    holding  
        at the edge  
                     of disappearing.
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Haight Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 5:28 PM
Dear Alison, I am in awe of the Cosmos, and I am drawn to everything about it. You chose such a great topic to meet the theme for this contest, and you have delivered its immense chaos not only in your well-chosen descriptive examples and words, but also in the delivery of your poem's form- spilling down in fragmented chaos! Congratulations on your wonderful, well-deserved placement! Sandra 👍
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Sandra for your encouragement.❤️
One Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:32 AM
I love how your poem is a striking vision on order and destruction, beauty and darkness, and the hidden chaos within apparently perfect systems..The ending crystallizes the whole piece: beauty is not necessarily purity or innocence; it may be the fragile pattern that persists while everything threatens to disappear. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 3:04 PM
Thank you for the opportunity with this contest. I appreciate your judging. Your comments are deeply appreciated.❤️
Groen Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 5:43 PM
A life in the cosmos...where there is nothing and everything! Enjoyed your poem, thank you.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:45 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment 🌠🌃☄️
Delegans Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 11:00 PM
Very unique and descriptive. You are very diverse in your writing, Alison.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Thank you Christopher, this time back into writing I have tried new angles.🌹
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:31 PM
This is going right where it "needs to be" - in my favs, Alison. You really moved me with this work. Wow, it's so beautiful. 🌹
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:57 PM
Thank you dear friend Paige💕
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