Cosmos

I look at the night sky...
Wow, we are small, aren’t we?
Just a tiny spec floating in space.
It’s like we’re almost nothing...
I look over at you.
Your eyes seem to wander,
As if you were exploring the cosmos
From the ground we stand on.
Then I ask you...
“Why did you leave without me?
We could have stayed together...
You left me behind...”
You keep staring off
To whatever galaxy your mind is.
Silence is the only sound I hear...
Then I look upwards.
“Was it me?
Am I the problem?
Am I why you left?”
My eyes and hers are misty now...
But her eyes continue to wander,
Not looking away for even a second.
But finally, you look away, and through you tears…
I hear you say... “I’m sorry...”
You fade from existence,
And I’m left talking to myself.
I walk away, crying now...
But look back for a moment, just to say...
“I’m sorry too...”


4/25/18
Entered into the "Best Free Verse in April (not for a contest)" Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Nicely done, Connor, congratulations on your placement.
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April 28, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Congratulation on a well-deserved win! Best regards. Pandita
Gentry Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Oh wow! I felt the unexpected-ness of this. Congratulations on your win. Absolutely beautiful in several ways.
Gauthier Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Lovely, Connor. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Scars Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:50 PM
that last line was unexpected and it really gave me chills. Great poem Connor...thank you and congratulations on your placement. ;)-luloo Reply
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April 28, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thanks for the placement!
B. Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Amazing creativity Connor!! Bravo!! I enjoyed reading..
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