Cosmically Aligned Forever

Entered and did not place in ‘ANOTHER 2025 POSTED POEM’ contest. Judged 1/8/2025.

Marriage could not bind us but the stars would hold their own aligning us together as soulmates forever and a day touched by the cosmos and remembered with the cyclic sunsets
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Empress Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 8:09 AM
A very intriguing and soulful poem, that depicts selfless and soulful love beyond the worldly rules and more . It has an infinite vibe flowing throughout and is very well written! This is one of the best poems iv read from your poem, for the way youv used celestial and cosmic diction and metaphors that makes us readers feel and think deep! Excellent! Hope you are doing well! Pleasure always reading your poem and one that is emotive and heartfelt too. Sending you light always!
Greenhough Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 7:44 AM
This is an intriguing poem that brings to mind De Javu, I've been here before. The cosmos certainly do affect us. I'm aligned with your words.
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