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Cosmic Illusion

everpresent sun appearing to move with time across the heavens

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/22/2019 5:45:00 PM
Love this!
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P.M. Richter
Date: 10/22/2019 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 9/12/2019 8:09:00 AM
The universe doesn’t revolve around us? Perspective is an interesting thing. I enjoyed your haiku.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 9/12/2019 9:05:00 AM
I agree - thanks Richard ;)
Date: 8/24/2019 7:37:00 AM
SUN TIME HEAVEN COSMO PERFECT ALGORITHM CREATED BY THE BIGGEST  SALUTE ALKAS
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P.M. Richter
Date: 8/27/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Alkas
Date: 8/2/2019 6:29:00 AM
Beautifully-made poem.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 8/2/2019 9:30:00 AM
You are very kind. Thank you!
Date: 6/1/2019 4:56:00 AM
lovely haiku PM:-) hugs Jan xx
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P.M. Richter
Date: 6/1/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan :)