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Cosmic Groove: Crossing Nebula

We ride the shimmer, stardust spun/
Between the birth of dying suns/
A groove of galaxies unwinds/
The pulse of silence, vast, sublime/

Nebulae breathe, in violet streams/
We waltz on waves of astral dreams/
Comet tails curl, a cosmic tune/
Our shadows cast by fractured moons/

Through veils of gas and drifting light,
We pass from day into the night/
Where gravity’s embrace is loose
We dance, unanchored, star-induced/

Electric hearts, in sync, align
With every ancient, pulsing sign/
We cross the nebula, become
A groove eternal, endless drum/

And when the universe exhales
Its secrets, stardust, cosmic tales/
We’ll still be moving, you and I,
Across the nebula-lit sky/
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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 7:28 PM
A luminous, rhythm-driven cosmic voyage. The strong end-rhymes and four-line stanzas give it a steady spoken-word pulse, while images such as “violet streams,” “fractured moons,” and the universe exhaling make the immense setting feel intimate, musical, and alive.
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