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Cosmic Gaze

Emerald eyes lit
Serene sapphire ocean eyes,
Swirling slow galaxies

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Danny Derden

Date: 6/25/2025 11:57:00 AM

This haiku paints a vivid picture of captivating eyes, using rich color imagery and a cosmic metaphor to evoke depth and allure. It's concise yet deeply evocative.

Anne Winter
Date: 6/27/2025 7:41:00 AM

Thank you so much for writing such a thoughtful comment :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/26/2025 5:58:00 AM

Ew la la, deep and intense ... CayCay

Anne Winter
Date: 5/26/2025 7:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear friend. You're brilliant!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/19/2025 9:31:00 AM

Dearest Anne, I saw a luminous miniature with so much wonder in so few words! I love how you paint eyes as galaxies, swirling with color and mystery. The emerald and sapphire imagery is enchanting, inviting me to gaze deeper into the cosmos within. Such a sparkling little universe. Oh' the beauty and depth we can find in a single, thoughtful glance. Excellent! Spring Blessings, My Dearest Anne, Daniel

Anne Winter
Date: 5/19/2025 6:20:00 PM

Dearest Daniel, I'm so glad you enjoyed the haiku and saw the depth in it. It's especially meaningful coming from you, someone whose work I admire. Thank you so much! My dearest friend. Warmly, Anne

Ink Empress

Date: 5/17/2025 4:55:00 AM

How beautiful is your haiku! I love your use of gems here, and how descriptive your word weaving throughout here is! Stunning as always, dear anne, pleasure reading you today, sending you light always!

Anne Winter
Date: 5/17/2025 6:50:00 AM

Dear IE, how grateful I am for your kind words. I truly appreciate you! Thanks you so much, my dear friend. Best,Anne