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Cosmic Gaze

Emerald eyes lit Serene sapphire ocean eyes, Swirling slow galaxies

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Date: 6/25/2025 11:57:00 AM
This haiku paints a vivid picture of captivating eyes, using rich color imagery and a cosmic metaphor to evoke depth and allure. It's concise yet deeply evocative.
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Anne Winter
Date: 6/27/2025 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing such a thoughtful comment :)
Date: 5/26/2025 5:58:00 AM
Ew la la, deep and intense ... CayCay
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/26/2025 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear friend. You're brilliant!
Date: 5/19/2025 9:31:00 AM
Dearest Anne, I saw a luminous miniature with so much wonder in so few words! I love how you paint eyes as galaxies, swirling with color and mystery. The emerald and sapphire imagery is enchanting, inviting me to gaze deeper into the cosmos within. Such a sparkling little universe. Oh' the beauty and depth we can find in a single, thoughtful glance. Excellent! Spring Blessings, My Dearest Anne, Daniel
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/19/2025 6:20:00 PM
Dearest Daniel, I'm so glad you enjoyed the haiku and saw the depth in it. It's especially meaningful coming from you, someone whose work I admire. Thank you so much! My dearest friend. Warmly, Anne
Date: 5/17/2025 4:55:00 AM
How beautiful is your haiku! I love your use of gems here, and how descriptive your word weaving throughout here is! Stunning as always, dear anne, pleasure reading you today, sending you light always!
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/17/2025 6:50:00 AM
Dear IE, how grateful I am for your kind words. I truly appreciate you! Thanks you so much, my dear friend. Best,Anne
Date: 5/17/2025 2:24:00 AM
- Beautifully described, Anne :) - hugs
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/17/2025 6:53:00 AM
Dear Anne, Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked the haiku! Best, Anne
Date: 5/16/2025 8:29:00 AM
Exquisitely penned cosmic gaze. Thanks for your comment on my page
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/17/2025 6:51:00 AM
Dear poet, thank you so much for your lovely note! I'm glad you liked the haiku. Best, Anne
Date: 5/16/2025 1:18:00 AM
this is so impressive poetry, thanks
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/16/2025 5:12:00 AM
Dear Yann, your lovely note means a lot. Thank you so much! Best, Anne
Date: 5/15/2025 3:37:00 PM
Emerald and sapphire ocean eyes, both so beautiful, Anne. --Anaya
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/15/2025 7:37:00 PM
Dear Anaya, thank you for the kind words! I appreciate you! Best,Anne
Date: 5/15/2025 6:58:00 AM
Love cosmic poetry. Love this haiku
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Anne Winter
Date: 5/15/2025 7:34:00 AM
Dear Tom, I'm glad you liked the haiku. Thank you!

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