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COSMIC DREAMS

Be it evidence consequence or coincidence Every night as I succumb to somnolence Heavenly smoke rings of frankincense Rise upwards with sweet opulence Dulcet dreams inevitably commence Without fanfare hype or pretense While sweet loving arms of providence Wrap around me a shroud of benevolence Under a scented canopy of impermanence Ablaze with the aura of glowing confidence Revealing universal secrets of magnificence I humbly bow in unpretentious reverence Adrift in solitude so many nights hence I reminisce of nostalgia in the past tense AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on June 6, 2019, for contest YOUR CHOICE (3) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION Originally posted on March 6, 2019

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Date: 6/8/2019 2:38:00 AM
This wonderful poem would be way up there on the list for me Line. As you know I loved it. Congratulations on your HM : )
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Date: 6/8/2019 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/7/2019 9:10:00 PM
Line so beautifully written and well deserved win too I might add!
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Date: 6/7/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Brenda.
Date: 3/31/2019 5:16:00 PM
Hello Kin, I like this comic dream. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/31/2019 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I like to think we are all kin in our wonderful world of poetry.
Date: 3/29/2019 6:43:00 PM
I read this, then read it again, and again! Just kidding, it is written so beautifully. I don' t think I have ever used some of these words. But I certainly respect and enjoyed your clever use of them. A favorite, Line!
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Date: 3/29/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 3/28/2019 4:28:00 PM
I`ll have to refer to my dictionary on this one Line. But i`ll get back to ya.
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Date: 3/28/2019 8:03:00 PM
LOL Charlie - just go with the flow...
Date: 3/8/2019 10:11:00 AM
Well, that's definitely a "fav". Deep,profound and very well penned.
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Date: 3/8/2019 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, ML, for your lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 3/7/2019 4:32:00 PM
Very creative and thought-provoking, Line! Janice
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Date: 3/7/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Janice.
Date: 3/7/2019 5:47:00 AM
Wow Line, this is one of the loveliest monorhymes I have ever read! It has such a Zen feeling to it. Truly outstanding! xxoo : )
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Date: 3/7/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Connie.
Date: 3/7/2019 5:43:00 AM
What a monorhyme! Went to my FAVE list, Line. Immediately! I am bowing to this one.
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Date: 3/7/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren, for the most appreciated compliment.
Date: 3/7/2019 12:59:00 AM
A Fav for me LOVE IT! This poem lulled me with its power to engage my brain.
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Date: 3/7/2019 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy, for the lovely compliment.