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Cosmic Consciousness

Cosmic Consciousness Within immense universe Human is a desert mirage Ancient being in search of His veiled mysterious past Brandishes worthless gold As wisdom opens the path To enlightenment that last Penned: 1/15/2022 3:20 a.m. Lake Worth Florida USA

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Date: 2/15/2022 10:52:00 PM
We are just motes in this vast universe as chimerical as the desert mirage! Still we think we are something !
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/16/2022 5:34:00 PM
Hi Valsa, I always appreciate your visit and input! In my humble opinion, humans can become radiant beings, part of an eternal consciousness, as long as humanity can change course, change a virulent, destructive attitude towards his own blood, and all other forms of life on Earth, be more tolerant, kind and sympathetic to all, then humanity might see a brighter tomorrow for the next thousand generations, if our kind don't become extinct first. Take care always...ab
Date: 1/16/2022 12:47:00 AM
A desert mirage. Love this phrase. After all man compared to the universe is but a grain of sand.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/16/2022 1:57:00 AM
A real accurate interpretation Victor, and a big thank you for the +comment!...ab
Date: 1/15/2022 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful! Incidentally, Anselmo, I was at an open-air market in Lake Worth while I was in Florida last week. Beautiful poem; beautiful place!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/15/2022 5:10:00 PM
I did buy a plant, Anselmo. Thanks for your well-wishes.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/15/2022 3:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Milt for the ++remark! Here's a belated warm and sandy Florida welcome, I know you've taken a few sabbaticals in different cities here in the past. Fascinating you drifted to Lake Worth, I hope the market you went to sold you some good edibles!...ab

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