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Cosmic Adventure

Ride a comet in a downward spiral across the solar sysstem Catch a lift on a shooting star and go where it takes you Feel the heat of Mercury briefly then teleport to Pluto and cool off Spend a night in Neptune enjoy the darkness then travel toward the sun Voyage to Uranus see the seventeen moons proceed to Mars and swim the empy rivers Stop in Venus soak in the showers of acid rain now leave the goddess and visit her sister Make your way home to Earth and enjoy life for it exists nowhere else in our universe It would take lifetimes to complete this journey but not one second would be wasted What an exhilirating ride to image if only it were possible By: Bruce Mahnken

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Date: 9/14/2010 4:10:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bruce. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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