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Above the skyline, watch me enthrall… torches of fire glitter in seamless motion an orange fist rolling in undefined numbers, heaven thick with round saw dusts some oblong, others just ringlets circling through Mother Earth's trapeze, like crystal fibrils wheeling,darting… Yet in relays, my limbs do not collide with space each of them holding an alchemy, while millions are unnamed, untamed, unattained. Tell me, how many other bodies have i sired where heat or water resides? Prophets say it will take light years to touch my face and climb into this house… And if gods live among my gleaming blobs I want to know how you can reach me should breaths topple on fading lights. My contour swells far into clouds open to keep glazed pellets from devouring my eyes… the wind, the elements swarm inside me as I watch your heartbeat pulsate,enthralled!

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Date: 3/28/2014 7:51:00 PM
Nette, rich visionary image of your place in the universe, enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/11/2014 6:35:00 PM
superb Nette what a super pen gl in contest hugs
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:07:00 PM
I like what Deb said below, I am enthralled by this enchanting write! This is a wondrous write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this lovely poem! I surely enjoyed reading this magnificent piece this evening. I especially loved the line, "the wind, the elements swarm inside me" wow, now that says a lot there, and you even highlighted it! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:43:00 PM
This is wonderful nette... My number one pleasure is to star gaze. I am a member of Amateur Astronomy on facebook...You should take a look at some of the amazing photos.....Tim
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:20:00 PM
Dear Nette: A lovely journey through the cosmic soup. So many images to soak in! Leon
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:24:00 PM
wow this is great nette! I am enthralled ! luv,Deb
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:16:00 PM
- With your beautiful poem - you can enthrall most readers - Have a lovely Monday .... new week !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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