Cosmic

gods live among my gleaming blobs I want to know how you can reach me should breaths topple on fading lights. My contour swells far into clouds open to keep glazed pellets from devouring my eyes… the wind, the elements swarm inside me as I watch your heartbeat pulsate...I am enthralled!
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Harper Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Nette, rich visionary image of your place in the universe, enjoyed it.
Hamilton Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 6:35 PM
superb Nette what a super pen gl in contest hugs
Sivey Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:07 PM
I like what Deb said below, I am enthralled by this enchanting write! This is a wondrous write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this lovely poem! I surely enjoyed reading this magnificent piece this evening. I especially loved the line, "the wind, the elements swarm inside me" wow, now that says a lot there, and you even highlighted it! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 6:43 PM
This is wonderful nette... My number one pleasure is to star gaze. I am a member of Amateur Astronomy on facebook...You should take a look at some of the amazing photos.....Tim
Enriquez Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Dear Nette: A lovely journey through the cosmic soup. So many images to soak in! Leon
Wilson Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:24 PM
wow this is great nette! I am enthralled ! luv,Deb
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March 9, 2014 at 1:16 PM
- With your beautiful poem - you can enthrall most readers - Have a lovely Monday .... new week !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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