Cosmic

gods live among my gleaming blobs I want to know how you can reach me should breaths topple on fading lights. My contour swells far into clouds open to keep glazed pellets from devouring my eyes… the wind, the elements swarm inside me as I watch your heartbeat pulsate...I am enthralled!

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 3/28/2014 7:51:00 PM

Nette, rich visionary image of your place in the universe, enjoyed it.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/11/2014 6:35:00 PM

superb Nette what a super pen gl in contest hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/9/2014 11:07:00 PM

I like what Deb said below, I am enthralled by this enchanting write! This is a wondrous write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this lovely poem! I surely enjoyed reading this magnificent piece this evening. I especially loved the line, "the wind, the elements swarm inside me" wow, now that says a lot there, and you even highlighted it! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/9/2014 6:43:00 PM

This is wonderful nette... My number one pleasure is to star gaze. I am a member of Amateur Astronomy on facebook...You should take a look at some of the amazing photos.....Tim

Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/9/2014 6:20:00 PM

Dear Nette: A lovely journey through the cosmic soup. So many images to soak in! Leon

Deb Wilson

Date: 3/9/2014 1:24:00 PM

wow this is great nette! I am enthralled ! luv,Deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2014 1:16:00 PM

- With your beautiful poem - you can enthrall most readers - Have a lovely Monday .... new week !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)