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Poet Doctor’s Haiku Contest

Cors Leaves

fallen oak’s cors leaves
over the kitchen window
— unnatural shade

7/5/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/4/2018 1:22:00 PM
Except for the host's requirement, line one would read just as well w/ or wo cors, and even so branches would suffice. Excellent haiku and deserving of 1st place, Kim. Cors sounds so human as in bodily. A super last line for jux. I'm impressed. Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 6:38:00 AM
Thank you, Reason! :):)
Date: 7/13/2018 2:12:00 PM
Kim, well done and crafted Haiku. Made in the shade, sort of. Ha ha! What a sensitive touch. Poetic hugs to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 7/11/2018 2:16:00 PM
Big congrats, Kim, on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita!
Date: 7/10/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim. Wonderful haiku!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you, Warren!
Date: 7/7/2018 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/7/2018 9:38:00 AM
I enjoyed your haiku ~ congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, P.M.
Date: 7/7/2018 1:06:00 AM
lovely autumnal imagery Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2018 5:56:00 AM
Thank you, Jan! xx
Date: 7/6/2018 1:22:00 PM
- Kim, congratulations on your well deserved win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs...Kim
Date: 7/6/2018 1:05:00 PM
I never heard of this cors word before but you did very well with your haiku win. Cogratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! It means corpse.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:01:00 PM
A haiku of such wondrous beauty, Kim. Inspired and impressive. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
Potent haiku! Well done. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! xx
Date: 7/6/2018 11:19:00 AM
Great Hiaku. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! :)
Date: 7/6/2018 10:23:00 AM
Window with you too! ... Lovely Haiku ... Congratulations ... Thank you for liking my haiku The Rejoicing Past ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 10:36:00 AM
Your welcome! Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/6/2018 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, brilliant Haiku, so talented. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 10:36:00 AM
I so appreciate that, Roy! :)
Date: 7/6/2018 9:14:00 AM
Nicely done! Congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Date: 7/6/2018 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on you podium finish, Kim. Beautiful visual.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Line! Very excited!
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