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Poet Doctor’s Haiku Contest

Cors Leaves

fallen oak’s cors leaves
over the kitchen window
— unnatural shade

7/5/2018

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2018

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Reason A. Poteet

August 4, 2018 at 1:22 PM

Except for the host's requirement, line one would read just as well w/ or wo cors, and even so branches would suffice. Excellent haiku and deserving of 1st place, Kim. Cors sounds so human as in bodily. A super last line for jux. I'm impressed. Congratulations.

August 5, 2018 at 6:38 AM

Thank you, Reason! :):)

July 13, 2018 at 2:12 PM

Kim, well done and crafted Haiku. Made in the shade, sort of. Ha ha! What a sensitive touch. Poetic hugs to you.

July 13, 2018 at 5:55 PM

Thank you, Greg!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 11, 2018 at 2:16 PM

Big congrats, Kim, on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

July 11, 2018 at 3:47 PM

Thank you, Pandita!

July 10, 2018 at 2:09 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim. Wonderful haiku!

July 10, 2018 at 2:13 PM

Thank you, Warren!

July 7, 2018 at 5:57 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

July 7, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Thank you, Susan!

July 7, 2018 at 9:38 AM

I enjoyed your haiku ~ congratulations on your win!

July 7, 2018 at 10:05 AM

Thank you, P.M.

July 7, 2018 at 1:06 AM

lovely autumnal imagery Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

July 7, 2018 at 5:56 AM

Thank you, Jan! xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 6, 2018 at 1:22 PM

- Kim, congratulations on your well deserved win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 6, 2018 at 5:42 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs...Kim

Andrea Dietrich

July 6, 2018 at 1:05 PM

I never heard of this cors word before but you did very well with your haiku win. Cogratulations.

July 6, 2018 at 5:42 PM

Thank you, Andrea! It means corpse.

July 6, 2018 at 12:01 PM

A haiku of such wondrous beauty, Kim. Inspired and impressive. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

July 6, 2018 at 5:41 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 6, 2018 at 11:26 AM

Potent haiku! Well done. Congratulations on your win! xomo

July 6, 2018 at 5:40 PM

Thank you, Maureen! xx

July 6, 2018 at 11:19 AM

Great Hiaku. Congrats on your win.

July 6, 2018 at 5:41 PM

Thank you, Robert! :)

July 6, 2018 at 10:23 AM

Window with you too! ... Lovely Haiku ... Congratulations ... Thank you for liking my haiku The Rejoicing Past ...

July 6, 2018 at 10:36 AM

Your welcome! Thank you, my friend!

July 6, 2018 at 9:37 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, brilliant Haiku, so talented. :))

July 6, 2018 at 10:36 AM

I so appreciate that, Roy! :)

July 6, 2018 at 9:14 AM

Nicely done! Congratulations on your win hugs Eve

July 6, 2018 at 10:37 AM

Thank you, Eve! xx

July 6, 2018 at 8:07 AM

Congrats on you podium finish, Kim. Beautiful visual.

July 6, 2018 at 8:12 AM

Thank you, Line! Very excited!

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