Corridors of Time

Down through the corridors of time
My gallery with varied halls
Halls of emotions that chime
Reverberating bouncing call

Youthful emotions really pine
Feelings of angst rules this time
Corridors of life _dark or shine
Hope mine shines with rhyme

Troubadours of soul in evening
Lover of life all this long time
Doors of heaven opened gifting
The sage that was hiddened within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nieves Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 8:07 AM
I LOVE IT! superb topic. thanks 4 passing by.
Tate Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:19 PM
I like this poem. It takes you back through memories, that gift of memories that we all cherish. James
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sara. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2010 at 12:55 PM
enjoyed your works today mom. Have not been in the poetry notion with all the holiday hum and having my son to bug me/entertain me. LOL Now he is hanging out at your house!
Pangelov Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Doors of heaven opened gifting Time does not exist when the corridors are open, Sarah. Happy New Year.
Chachere Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 10:36 AM
a wonderful poem, Sara. filled with everything that seemed to be abandoned through time. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Onclaud Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 2:34 AM
a real treat to read this jewel of a piece, sara... " troubador of soul", you really are! huggs, nette
La France Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 10:23 PM
I loved the first line and every line after it~~
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December 25, 2010 at 8:48 PM
nice Sara, and merry x- mass,..p.d.
Guzzi Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Hope you're well and Happy! Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Lovely concept, Sara. Wonderful final stanza. "the sage that was hidden within" My poetry came late to me too! Luv, Andrea
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December 25, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Hi Sara. Lovely, lovely piece. it sums up the fact that all emotions, good and bad, are heightened at this time of year.Congratulations and peace. Eamon
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December 25, 2010 at 10:57 AM
So many thoughts of past Christmases have been going through my mind today, Sara. The "halls of emotions" open wide on this day and I can feel the powerful emotion in your poem. Merry Christmas to you and your family, dear. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us. Prayers continue. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Nice write Corridores of Time, Sara. Quite inspiringedv
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