Corridors of Time

Down through the corridors of time
My gallery with varied halls
Halls of emotions that chime
Reverberating bouncing call

Youthful emotions really pine
Feelings of angst rules this time
Corridors of life _dark or shine
Hope mine shines with rhyme

Troubadours of soul in evening
Lover of life all this long time
Doors of heaven opened gifting
The sage that was hiddened within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/4/2011 8:07:00 AM
I LOVE IT! superb topic. thanks 4 passing by.
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:19:00 PM
I like this poem. It takes you back through memories, that gift of memories that we all cherish. James
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Date: 12/29/2010 6:39:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sara. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 12:55:00 PM
enjoyed your works today mom. Have not been in the poetry notion with all the holiday hum and having my son to bug me/entertain me. LOL Now he is hanging out at your house!
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Date: 12/27/2010 11:32:00 PM
Doors of heaven opened gifting Time does not exist when the corridors are open, Sarah. Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:36:00 AM
a wonderful poem, Sara. filled with everything that seemed to be abandoned through time. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/26/2010 2:34:00 AM
a real treat to read this jewel of a piece, sara... " troubador of soul", you really are! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:23:00 PM
I loved the first line and every line after it~~
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Date: 12/25/2010 8:48:00 PM
nice Sara, and merry x- mass,..p.d.
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Date: 12/25/2010 5:11:00 PM
Hope you're well and Happy! Light & Love
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Date: 12/25/2010 5:10:00 PM
Lovely concept, Sara. Wonderful final stanza. "the sage that was hidden within" My poetry came late to me too! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:27:00 AM
Hi Sara. Lovely, lovely piece. it sums up the fact that all emotions, good and bad, are heightened at this time of year.Congratulations and peace. Eamon
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:57:00 AM
So many thoughts of past Christmases have been going through my mind today, Sara. The "halls of emotions" open wide on this day and I can feel the powerful emotion in your poem. Merry Christmas to you and your family, dear. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us. Prayers continue. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/25/2010 8:07:00 AM
Nice write Corridores of Time, Sara. Quite inspiringedv
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