Correction, At Brief
Love of reality;
When it seems so tough,
To fit dignity,
And lose not value,
Yet encouraging...
Should simply brief:
Wisdom justly;
Apt and concise
Critical theme(s).
To shape mind,
Running blind,
Being spells bind.
Pleasure
Turns pain:
Rue!
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