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All too briefly, all too unclear, I barely shared the senses of a scribe some centuries ago. Yet, brief and unclear as it was, it shook me. It shakes me still. He was a wise man, it seems, and at some time young and prosperous, but now he is dead and gone. I momentarily joined him on the hills, in the parks, at the waters, in the woods; I have been there too. And an instant before my musing had ended I was shaken. My transient, youthful ease was shaken. But I gave no ground to the mortified spiral, I might have, but I did not, It has been some time since I did. It drains me far too much. 23rd October 2000

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Date: 7/30/2018 10:10:00 PM
The imagery is really nice here! That last line is everything! :)
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/31/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Jasmine, there for your enjoyment.
Date: 7/30/2018 9:21:00 AM
I agree, an absolutely amazing poem, Lawrence.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/30/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Warren, I'm always encouraged by good feedback.
Date: 7/29/2018 10:36:00 AM
Jesus Christ, what an amazing poem.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/30/2018 12:11:00 AM
Are you kidding me ? Thank you, such high praise from such a respected poet, I'm humbled, Sir. To be fair, I only failed to comment on your 'Casual Observation' piece because I didn't know where to start.

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