Corporality

All too briefly, all too unclear,
I barely shared the senses
of a scribe some centuries ago.
Yet, brief and unclear as it was,
it shook me.
It shakes me still.
He was a wise man, it seems,
and at some time young and prosperous,
but now he is dead and gone.
I momentarily joined him
on the hills, in the parks,
at the waters, in the woods;
I have been there too.
And an instant before my musing had ended
I was shaken.
My transient, youthful ease was shaken.
But I gave no ground
to the mortified spiral,
I might have, but I did not,
It has been some time since I did.
It drains me far too much.

23rd October 2000
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Koria Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 10:10 PM
The imagery is really nice here! That last line is everything! :)
Sharp Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Thanks Jasmine, there for your enjoyment.
Doll Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:21 AM
I agree, an absolutely amazing poem, Lawrence.
Sharp Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Warren, I'm always encouraged by good feedback.
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July 29, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Jesus Christ, what an amazing poem.
Sharp Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Are you kidding me ? Thank you, such high praise from such a respected poet, I'm humbled, Sir. To be fair, I only failed to comment on your 'Casual Observation' piece because I didn't know where to start.
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