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Back to writing country music. This one quite bawdy. Apologies to anyone it shocks. I think its hilarious. 

 

 

It's rare that most would call me a hot head I am usually the coolest cucumber instead I have no tells, so their heads don't swell and I don't get entangled to soon But there is this tall lanky guy you see who plays a mean bluegrass guitar so sweet! and he's turned me on my head my tongue lolling out the side, I feel a big oh wet appetite Its going to be corn dogs yeah baby and ice cream cones I have to whip up these muscles and work on my tone He gonna have expectations of meee and I intend to make him sing oh yeah oh how deee I do drive like a race car driver I confess and mr ex officer may have to give me a new test until he gets over that I will have a bit of time to press But never before would anyone claim I swear that I was a hot headed daredevil minx its this tall lanky boy and his talk of being my toy and I don't ever want it to jinx It's going to be corn dogs yeah baby and ice cream cones I have to whip up these muscles and work on my tone He gonna have expectations of meee and I intend to make him sing hot diggity! I wonder how he likes his ice cubes. jagged or smooth and how stiff he likes his drinks on the rocks or straight shot no lube And I just await tying him down so we can just work out the kinks It's going to be corn dogs yeah baby and ice cream cones I have to whip up these muscles and work on my tone He gonna have expectations of meee and a month of head bobbin review with a view - Corn Dogs and Ice Cream Cones for Brian - Artimus (C) Susan Manley 4/22/24 1:51AM

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Date: 5/2/2024 10:20:00 AM
Your poem exudes a playful and flirtatious energy, filled with vivid imagery and anticipation. The persona you've crafted, typically cool and collected, finds themselves swept off their feet by a tall, lanky musician with a talent for bluegrass guitar.
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Date: 5/1/2024 4:58:00 PM
loved it, absolutely loved it, Susan. Bawdy? Yes, but effective and creative. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Susan Manley
Date: 5/1/2024 5:31:00 PM
LOL LOL LOL yep, it makes me laugh too.

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