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What more can I write
Except to stagger
On paper
What good has it done
Only to deepen
Sudden depression
What help such has become
When pain becomes acute
What light it bringeth forth
Only a shadow
Of what once was
Such disaster it has been
In my lonely prison
In shackles of emotion
And dour- faced beauties
What hope has it brought
Except a similar one 
Of future forever’s
What more can I write   
Only that I’m down at heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/5/2012 5:11:00 AM
I'm a bit shocked at some of the really good works that ya'll are doin, this is one of the great ones i'm seeing today. wow
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Date: 4/10/2012 8:25:00 PM
Cheer up Damilola. Surely the fruit of humbleness is manifested in your writing. Truly God has a purpose in your poetry.. Diana Mohammed
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Date: 4/10/2012 6:28:00 AM
Such a lonely poem. Keep writing - it may do others good and hopefully the spirit follows. Kathy Thanks for your comment on Whose Blood.
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Date: 4/10/2012 5:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Damilola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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